Audience Feedback on my Pitch.

Name of Group and task idea: Sophie-Magazine called Replay.
Genre: Indie
Target Audience: Teenagers- Boys & Girls.
Other texts it reminds you of: NME, Q.

Potential Problems:

• Effort
• Needs to be more organised.
• No proper story thought out.
• Unsure story.
• Unsure of story which could affect planning and final magazine.
• Target audience.
• Cluttered front page. How are you going to put a different spin on your magazine to make it unique.
• Looks more feminine.

Positive Comments:

• Good pictures that are interesting. My age group.
• Good colour pallettte, which appeals to both boys & girls.
• Similar to my taste. Purple/Black/White-colours work well together.
• The idea and the name.
• Purple/Black and White. should look good.
• Good colour scheme which fits the genre.
• Good colour Pallette.
• The theme is articulate and has potential. Colour scheme works really well.
• Design on moodboard looks good.
• Colour scheme of Purple/Black/White will look good.

Advice/Suggestions:

• Sort out main story.
• Make the subject of the double page spread the main feature on your front page.
• Use small bands.
• Make sure you make it appealing to both boys & girls.
• Keep Going.
• Try to think of a story to base planning on.
• Decide Story.
• Research more magazines.
• Produce a mock-up of the magazine in order to really understand the context & research more magazines and choose an official style model.
• Organise yourself more e.g know your stories.
• Use popular bands.