Draft Feedback

Work includes the following (taken from the AS portfolio schedule):

Moodboards: Done
Examples of other texts/style models: Done
Analysis of magazine covers/film openings: Done
Title of product (Can be working title): Done
25 Word Pitch: Done
Pitch Feedback:Done
Shots of work on magazine cover including photo shoot: Not Done
Complete mock version of cover/contents page/doublepage spread and draft article: Done

Comments:
Did you take pictures and create collage background?-Need to see evidence posted for both. Genre isn't clear enough. Position of main subject needs work. Masthead shouldn't obscure face. Colour palette is not effective enough. You must show variety in types of shots used. You need to use your research more effectively.The ideas you have gathered must be evident in your final pieces of work to achieve a good grade. Play around with layouts- Post examples on the blog. That way we can see progress made and help you improve.